這封求職信中求職者首先搬出了自己的碩士導師，因為他是個知名人士，并且在信里附上他的推薦信。這些都是有效的求職辦法。另他還強調自己會2種外語且發表過論文，這種“自我標榜”在求職信里是很重要的。

　　Director of Consulting Center

　　Shanghai Foreign Service Co., Ltd

　　406 Maoming Mansion, 580 Maoming Rd(S)

　　Luwan District, Shanghai 20021

　　Dear Mr. Director,

　　I am currently working on Master Degree in International Commercial law at Fu Dan University. My supervisor Mr. Liu Mingyu, a well-know professor of law, tells me that SFSC specializes in recommending qualified personnel to muti-national companies and suggests that I contact you for recommendation.

　　During the two years of studies at Fu Dan University, I have not only acquired a lot of knowledge of international commercial law, but learned two foreign languages as well -English and Japanese. Moreover, I have published two papers in the university journal on problems that may arise after China's entry to WTO. And they have been favorably accepted.

　　I am enclosing a resume, copies of my published papers, and Professor Liu's letter of recommendation.

　　I sincerely hope you wil introduce me to a famous multi-national company, to which I will dedicate myself.

　　Truly yours,

　　Fu Jialin